So people know.The world of Sims 4 is never ending. Lastly you can request a Mod to give you a developer tag. Last statement would be on the very ending mentioning a Chloe who wasn't in the game previously, is a bit weird to introduce them by name and not see them, when you could have used any previous name/character. Maybe an extra 1 or 2 on the size of the font for legibility of the harder to see persons. Remember your audience might not be native English speakers, let alone know cursive. To make them still stand out, but not hard to read cursive. Personally the cursive names were a bit hard to read, in my opinion it would be nicer to be basic printed names, but slightly more interesting, like Paeonia having flowers on her name, stuff like that. The blue coloration on bathroom use of power might have been a bit hard to read, I think it was dark blue, which Ren'Py chooses a shitty dark blue which is hard on the eyes.ĪMD might have some cheaper good cards out too, so might be lighter on your budget or that could go further.įont choices. It is also why I pointed out grammarly, you can throw text in there before you put it in the game to double check. You can request someone to proofread here. I tried to click all the text boxes to see what MC would say, but as I said, unsure if it changes text further down the chapter, and thus can't do a 100% check. Makes it slightly impossible to proofread without going into the files. Writing: It mostly makes sense, some typos and the like, maybe tryĬlick to expand.I know there are a bunch more typos or slight grammar oddities, but when paths start to branch and I have no idea how different the text will be. Renders: Either need more time in the pipe, more expertise, or a denoiser.Īnimation: None to really speak of. Each character has their own quirks, both in looks and personality A bunch of twists making it not seem as linear.Ĭharacters: They seem to all be non standard models so that is good. However I assume some of them will be answered later, and some are purposely put there. Story: I am slightly interested, many questions. (unsure if as a player the choices matter to the text, IE choosing gaming or exercise)

(text at end of game with white background is really hard to read since it is also white text)

(small oddity, if you just greet neighbor she mentions knock if she needs them, as if you did the dynamite joke) How you're feeling? : How are you feeling? Some random typos throughout, a few examples below. Anything in ( ) are ideas, thoughts, explanations, etc. Left of : is in game, right of : are fixes. Tags need to add Vaginal sex, Creampie, Superpowers/Magic? (Power given by a god, plus others magic or know of it)

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